صاحبة العظَمَة

<b><font                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    size"3" face="Arial Black" color="#000000">إِلَيْـكِ وَحْـدَكِ عِنْـدَ القَحْـطِ نَنْـصَـرِفُ=فَنَنْـهَـلُ الـرَّشَـدَ يَــاط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ُمِّــيْ وَنَـغْـتَـرِفُ

عَـيْـنَـاكِ                                                                                                                     يَـخْـتَـزِنُ                                                                                                                     الأَمْـجَــادَ                                                                                                                     لَيْلُـهُـمَـاوَفِــي                                                                                                                    بِحَارِهِـمَـا                                                                                                                    يسْتَـَعْـلـنُ                                                                                                                     الـشَّــرَفُ

مَارَسْتِ                                                                      حَقَّكِ                                                                      فِيْ                                                                      غَـزْوِ                                                                       القُلُـوبِ                                                                       وَقَـدْطَـارَتْ                                                                                                                     بِأَنْبَائِـكِ                                                                                                                     المَجْنُونَـةِ                                                                                                                      الصُّـحُـفُ

سَخَـرْتِ                                                                                        فِـيْ                                                                                        كِبْرِيَـاءٍ                                                                                        بِالأُلَـىْ                                                                                         زَعَمُـواأنَّ                                                                      الـهَـوَى                                                                       غَـايَـةٌ                                                                       حَـمْـرَاءُ                                                                       لا                                                                       هَــدَفُ

وَمِنْ                                                                                       سَمَاسِرَةِ                                                                                        العُشْقِ                                                                                        الأُلَـى                                                                                        اعْتَقَـدُواأنَّ                                                                      الصَّـبَـابَـةَ                                                                       لا                                                                       شَــــوقٌ                                                                       وَلا                                                                       دَنَــــفُ

شَرَّقْتِ                                                                                       فَانْقَادَ                                                                                       هَـذَا                                                                                        الشَّـرْقُ                                                                                        وَاعْتَرَفَـتْبِـكِ الخُيُـولُ  كَـمَـاط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬سْـيَـادُهُ  اعْتَـرَفُـوا

نَادَيْـتِ                                                                                       يَــا                                                                                       نَائِـمُـونَ                                                                                        اسْتَيْقِـظُـوا                                                                                        فَلَـقَـدْلاحَ                                                                                        الصَّبَـاحُ                                                                                        وَغَـنَّـى                                                                                        البُلْـبُـلُ                                                                                         الـدَّنِـفُ

وَرُحْـــتِ                                                                                                                     تَبْـنِـيْـنَ                                                                                                                     لِلْـدُّنْـيَـا                                                                                                                     مَعَـالِـمَـهَـاإذَا                                                                       اسْتَوتْ                                                                       غُرَفٌ                                                                       لاحَـتْ                                                                       بِهَـا                                                                        غُـرَفُ

يَـا                                                                      شَامَـةَ                                                                      المَجْـدِ                                                                       يَـا                                                                       كُبْـرَى                                                                       مَلاحِـمِـهِأَنْتِ                                                                      الَّتِي                                                                      مِنْ                                                                       رُؤَاهَـا                                                                       تَنْجَلِـي                                                                       السُّـدَفُ

لا                                                                      فَـجْـرَ                                                                      إِلا                                                                       وَمِــنْ                                                                       عَيْنَـيْـكِ                                                                       مَطْـلـعُـهُلا                                                                       صُبْـحَ                                                                       إِلا                                                                       وَمِـنْ                                                                       عَيْنَـيْـكِ                                                                       يَرْتَـشِـفُ

كُلُّ                                                                                        المُحِيْطَاتِ                                                                                        مِنْ                                                                                        يَنْبُوعِـكِ                                                                                        اغْتَرَفَـتْحَتَّى السَّحَـابُ  بِمَـاط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬عْطَيْـتِ  يَعْتَـرِفُ

كَمْ                                                          مِنْ                                                           مَنَـاةٍ                                                           وَمِـنْ                                                           عُـزَّى                                                           وَمِـنْ                                                           هُبَـلٍتَكَـادُ                                                                                        مِــنْ                                                                                        فَــارِعِ                                                                                        الأَنْــوَارِ                                                                                         تَنْخَـسِـفُ

كَـمْ مِـنْط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬َبِـيْ  جَهْـلٍ  اشْتَـدَّتْ  عَزَائِمُـهُفَــرَاحَ                                                                                                                     يَعْـصِـفُ                                                                                                                     بِالتَّـقْـوَىْ                                                                                                                     وَيَعْتَـسِـفُ

وَقَيْـصَـرٌ  ظَــنَّط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬َنْ  لا  قَـيْـصَـرٌ  مَـعَــهُفَـاغْـتَـرَّ  يَـــزْرَعُط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬َثَــامَــاً   وَيَـقْـتَــرِفُ

نَـازَلْـتِـهِـمْ                                                                                                                    فَـاسْـتَـكَـانُـوا                                                                                                                    لا                                                                                                                     مُـغَـالَـبَــةًأَبْـدَوا                                                                      وَلا                                                                      فِـيْ                                                                      التَّبَـارِيْ                                                                       قُــوَّةً                                                                       كَشَـفُـوا

نَعَـمْ                                                                      هُـمُ                                                                      الْتَحَفُـوا                                                                      لَـمَّـاْ                                                                      الْتَحَـفْـتِ                                                                      لَـهُـمْفَازْدَدْتِ                                                                      حُسْنَاً                                                                       وَمَا                                                                       ازْدَادُوا                                                                       إذِ                                                                       الْتَحَفُوا

الـمُـولـعُـونَ بِــأُفْــقٍ غَــيْــرِط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ُفْـقِـهُــمُوَالْفَـارِغُـونَ                                                                                                                     وَلَـكِـنْ                                                                                                                     كُـلُّـهُـمْ                                                                                                                      صَـلـفُ

صَلُّوا                                                                                        وَصَامُوا                                                                                        وَلَكِـنْ                                                                                        لَسْـتَ                                                                                        تَعْرِفُهُـمْفَـمَـا                                                                      لَـهَـمْ                                                                      خَـلـفٌ                                                                      يَـومَــاً                                                                      وَلا                                                                       سَـلــفُ

المُضْرِمُـونَ                                                                                                                     بِصَـحْـنِ                                                                                                                     الــدَّارِ                                                                                                                      نَـارَهُـمُلَـولا                                                                      المُـرُوءَاتُ                                                                      لَـمْ                                                                      يَسْلَـمْ                                                                       لَنَـا                                                                       كَـنَـفُ

الـعَـاقِـدُونَ                                                                                                                   مَـــعَ                                                                                                                    الشَّـيْـطَـانِ                                                                                                                    حِلْـفَـهُـمُالـحَـاقِـدُونَ                                                                                       إذَا                                                                                        سَـــارُوا                                                                                        وَإنْ                                                                                        وَقَـفُــوا

يَا                                                                      جَبْهَـةَ                                                                       الشَّعْـبِ                                                                       يَـا                                                                       تَحْرِيْـرَ                                                                       مَوْطِنِـهِيَا                                                                      عُقْدَةَ                                                                       الْخَصْمِ                                                                       لَوْ                                                                       يَرْضَـىْ                                                                       وَيَعْتَـرِفُ

يَـا                                                                      عِلَّـةً                                                                      تَسْـكُـنُ                                                                      الأَعْــدَاءَ                                                                       مَــا                                                                       بَقِـيَـتْنُفُـوسُـهُـمْ                                                                                                                    بِـــرِدَاءِ                                                                                                                     الـغَــدْرِ                                                                                                                     تَـلْـتَـحِـفُ

قَدْ                                                           نَاصَبُوكِ                                                           العَـدَاءَ                                                           المُـرَّ                                                            ..                                                            لا                                                            جَبَـلاًهَدُّوا                                                                       ..                                                                       وَلا                                                                       عُنْفُوَانَـاً                                                                       صَارِخَـاً                                                                        نَسَفُـوا

ضَلُّـوا                                                                                       فَذَلُّـوا                                                                                       فَلَمَّـا                                                                                        كَاشَـفُـوا                                                                                        انْكَشَـفُـواكَـذلِـكَ                                                                                       الـلُـؤْمُ                                                                                       يَخْـفَـىْ                                                                                       ثــُـمَّ                                                                                        يَنْـكـشِـفُ

عَلَّمْتِ                                                                                       فَـنَّ                                                                                       الصَّهِيْـلِ                                                                                        الْخَيْـلَ                                                                                        فَانْطَلَقَـتْتُـمَــجِّــدُ                                                                      اللهَ                                                                      لا                                                                      مَـــــنٌّ                                                                      وَلا                                                                       سَـــــرَفُ

تُـبَـارِكُ                                                                                        الـنُّـورَ                                                                                        تَهْـفُـو                                                                                        كَـــيْ                                                                                        تُعَـانِـقَـَهُوَلـيْــسَ                                                                                        يَصْـرِفُـهَـا                                                                                        وِرْدٌ                                                                                        وَلا                                                                                         عَــلــفُ

كـمْ                                                                                        نَخْلَـةٍ                                                                                        حِيْنَمَـا                                                                                        صَافَحْتِهَـا                                                                                        صَلَـحَـتْوَقَـدْ                                                                                        مَضَـى                                                                                        زَمَـنٌ                                                                                        عُرْجُونُهَـا                                                                                         حَشَـفُ

أَبْدَعْـتِ                                                                                       لِلْحُـبِّ                                                                                       قَامُـوسَـاً                                                                                        وَقَــدْ                                                                                        بَلِـيَـتْعِـصَـمُ القَصَـائِـدِ  لا  يَـــاءٌ  وَلاط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬َلِـــفُ

أَرْغَمْـتِ                                                                                        هَـذَا                                                                                        الزَّمَـانَ                                                                                        الْجَهْـمَ                                                                                        سَيِّدَتِـيْأنْ                                                           يَسْمَـعَ                                                           الوَحْـيَ                                                           لا                                                           كُفْـرٌ                                                           وَلا                                                           جَـنَـفُ

وَجَّـهْـتِ                                                                                       قَـاطِـرَةَ                                                                                       الدُّنْـيَـا                                                                                        وَقَــدْ                                                                                        لَبِـثَـتْحِيْـنَـاً                                                                                        تَحِـيْـدُ                                                                                        عَــنِ                                                                                        الدُّنْـيَـا                                                                                         وَتَنْـحَـرِفُ

أَصْلَحْـتِ                                                                                                                                                                               وجْهَتَـهَـا،قَـوَّمْـتِ                                                                                                                                                                                نَظْرَتَـهَـا،حَــدَّدْتِ                                                                                                                    قِبْلَتَـهَـا؛                                                                                                                     فَانْـصَـاعَ                                                                                                                     مُـنْـحَـرِفُ

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	ف

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اقتباس: المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أحمد العميري     أستاذنا و شاعرنا الكبير لحروفك رونق يأبي إلا أن يرمي إيقاعات معانيه في القلوب قبل الآذان سلم الله لسانك و أدام لنا بنانك رأيت أن أقوم بتشكيل القصيدة ... تلبية لرغبة أستاذي " عبد الرسول " و أتمنى أن لا أكون قد اجتزت حدا أو أخطأت في قرائتي لرائعتك

أخي الكريم جدا أحمد، مساء الخير
دعني أشكرك أولا قبل أن أرد على رائعة أخي محمد
هذا ما يحببنا بدارنا الكبيرة بكم هذي
فأستاذي الفاضل عبد الرسول ينسقها
و أنت تضع الحركات
الله الله على رقي خلق الأدباء هذا
سلمكم الله جميعا، و سلم الدار
و معاذ الله أن تكون قد أخطأت في شيء
فقط أخطأت في (قراءتها)
عندما قلتَ : " و أتمنى أن لا أكون قد اجتزت حدا أو أخطأت في قرائتي لرائعتك "
سلمت و بوركت و حييت و حفظك الله شاعرا أديبا، كريما
تحياتي لك و لكل الكرام في الدار

أستاذي المبدع جدا محمد، مساؤك الخير
هذه قصيدة أعطت للمرأة بهاءً و جمالا و قيمة لن تحصل عليها بألف قصيدة غزل
هذا أرقى و أحلى و أحب غزل لقلب المرأة حينما تقال بحقها مثل هذه الرائعة
فليس أحلى منها هدية للنساء اللواتي لهن أخوة و أبناء و آباء يحفظون لها قدرها و مقامها بين حروفهم
لأنها آسيا و مريم و عائشة و الزهراء فاطمة
لأنها الخنساء ؛ تماضر قومها، لأنها خولة الأسدية ؛ أخت الشجاع ضرار، لأنها سفانة ؛ بنت حاتم و أخت عدي
لأنها جميلة بو حيرد و فاطمة العراق و هدى و رحاب
بوركت و بورك هذا القلم الوضاء المنير
ألف شكر لك لأنك تحفظ للمرأة عهدا و تعكس صورتها البهية في زمن صار ينظر الآخرون لها بغير مرآتك البهية هذي
شديد إعجابي برائعتك هذي التي ما قرأت قصيدة غزل في المرأة أحلى و أسمى منها
لك تحياتي آلاف يا صاحب الحرف المتميز جدا
أجبت أخي عادل قبل أن أجيبه أنا بأن المنادى هنا نكرة مقصودة
أنتظر مرورك بقصائد الشعراء هنا، و بمن مروا بقصائدك السابقات
فمرور شاعر مثل أخي محمد سيسعد كل صاحب نص جميل حماك الله

لروعة الحروف

وجمال المعنى

دمت بخير

تحياتي

الشاعر المبدع محمد الضلعاوي شكرا لهذه الفائية الرائعة وهذه المعاني المباركة .. سباكة ونسج رصين وشاعرية حلوة .. لكن يستوقفني معنى " اعترفت بك الخيول " وأجد ان المعنى أيضا ضعيفا حينما نقول عن مناة وعزى بأنها "تكاد" من فارع الأنوار تنخسف، أي انها لم تنخسف بل كادت .. فلو قلت وكنّ أو غيرها بدل يكاد لكانت أبلغ .. مع شكري واعتذاري لك أيها الشاعر المتألق .. لك محبتي وتقديري .

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